Sage Tyrtle: serious, thoughtful, warm
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EnglishVoice Age
Middle Aged (35-54)Accents
North American (Canadian-General) North American (General) North American (US General American - GenAM)Transcript
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in this module will discuss the importance of detail in storytelling. If I say she went to the place carrying the thing, what do you picturing a big fuzzy nothing. Now what if I replace she with the Spider Queen? And where would a Spider Queen go to her layer? And she probably scuttled there. How about what she's carrying, Let's say 100 spider eggs now, instead of she went to the place carrying the thing we have, the Spider Queen scuttled into her layer carrying AH 100 spider eggs on her back. That's easy to imagine. So when do you include detail and when do you exclude it? Remember in module to we talked about editing your story. You learned how to decide whether or not to include a piece of information like I ate breakfast or two excluded. So now that you're sure you need to include the fact that you ate breakfast in your story, what's more effective? I ate breakfast or I ate coils, eggs and freshly squeezed orange juice for breakfast. The 2nd 1 is far easier for your audience to imagine, But not only that, the audience has learned quite a bit about you in Just those few words. The person who eats quail's eggs for breakfast is a far cry from this one. I was hungry, but all I could find in my fridge was a can of Fanta. I couldn't remember buying.